You did a nice job giving the reader background information on the show. Great pictures and a few of the links I viewed work and are helpful for giving me more information about the actors. The summary of the episode was clear. You made it feel like you were having a normal conversation, but with some formal tone. Overall it was a good article, nice flow and grammar.
good review but put a sentence in the beginning to draw the readers attention, like a lead in. another thing was i didn't find that many humorous comments. But, links and pics met the requirements and you had a good clarity on the show. i liked how you mentioned the director and producer in your review.It was good just wanna see more opinion/humor. Jacob.K
Very nice review, plenty of information including background on the characters and on the previous happenings on the show. Good vocabulary and grammar. A+ Jenna! Emily D.
You did a nice job giving the reader background information on the show. Great pictures and a few of the links I viewed work and are helpful for giving me more information about the actors. The summary of the episode was clear. You made it feel like you were having a normal conversation, but with some formal tone. Overall it was a good article, nice flow and grammar.
ReplyDeletegood review but put a sentence in the beginning to draw the readers attention, like a lead in. another thing was i didn't find that many humorous comments. But, links and pics met the requirements and you had a good clarity on the show. i liked how you mentioned the director and producer in your review.It was good just wanna see more opinion/humor. Jacob.K
ReplyDeleteVery nice review, plenty of information including background on the characters and on the previous happenings on the show. Good vocabulary and grammar. A+ Jenna!
ReplyDeleteEmily D.